复杂句
英语句型
复杂句(Complex Sentence)某个句子成分直接由从属分句表示,那么这种句子便不是简单句而是复杂句。
例句
The students would have made better grades if they had studied hard.
延伸
不少人认为”复杂句型”是高分的要件。所谓复杂句型就是利用各种子句连接词分词片语等,将简单句扩充为绕来绕去的长句。首先,它不易阅读,又容易出错,尤其是中间有时态、用字等问题。
考试时,尽量将复杂句控制在两句内,中间穿插简单句。其实,阅卷老师想看到的是有变化的句型,以及连贯的内容,不是整篇令人眼花的复杂句。
下面是一个同学写一篇关于林书豪的最後两句:
“…. Graduating from a prestigious university, Jeremy gave up the road to Wall Street, choosing his dream – NBA. With his marvelous story, he is not only the person I admire most but also everyone’s role model, teaching everyone insisting dreams and goals.”
这两句都有分词片语,但用法上必没有正确表达作者的意思。从连贯的角度,第一句中,看不出第二句所提的 ”marvelous” 的地方,少了一句说明他的成名。看下面改写是否让意思更完整,句子更通顺:
“With an Economics degree from a prestigious university, Jeremy gave up Wall Street and pursued his NBA dream instead. He eventually became one of the fastest-rising stars in NBA history. His success story not just fascinates me but inspires me to stick to my goals. I want to be as successful as he in the future. That explains the reason I take him as my role model.”
你如果对分词构句没把握,忘掉它。上面示范的就是简单,但有变化的句子写法,每一句都用不同字开头,结构也不一样(划线部分)。而且意思连贯,从两句便成易读的五句。
易读又连贯的句子才是受欢迎的句子。
参考资料
延伸.英文智库.
最新修订时间:2023-02-09 18:51
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